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Waiting To Inhale (My Story)
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Mar 12th, 2012, 08:33 AM
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le bon vivant
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Re: Waiting To Inhale (My Story)
Slow down the pace a little bit. Dont make every chapter a cliffhanger, extend out some of the dialogue so we can see what their personalities are like.
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