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kinglear
Dec 8th, 2006, 01:54 AM
I was thinking about Lena and I wrote it. Let me know what you all think.;)

One the Hard Way
Flaxen,
Hair
Smashing,
Flare,
Missiles
Shoot like flying daggers
You badger,
Like a beast
But you have the legs of a mare
One the hard way
Your icebox of a country has shaped you,
Molded you, made you,
Into a fighter, a Deus Ex Machina
The court is your stage
You’ve saved,
Yourself from trouble
But your kryptonite is all those faulting doubles
One the hard way
Your dimensions,
Are endless,
Power plays
After several hours, days
Pass by
And you reflect on times,
When you’ve been so close to the finish line
So say “Adios” to all the fiery-eyed demons
Who keep your heart steadily bleeding
One the hard way
Explosive weapons
Like a fireball, machete hybrid
You are such a very sly kid
You make your comebacks
Deus Ex Machina, your stamina, can’t outrun that
You’re a veteran
Aloof from your Pro brethren
Still a diamond in the rough
Although you’re sharp as princess cuts
You’ll reach your full potential
Just believe you’re exponential
It’s one the hard way

Dementinator
Dec 8th, 2006, 11:34 AM
very nice!

kinglear
Dec 8th, 2006, 03:11 PM
very nice!

Thanks! ;)

Danči Dementia
Dec 8th, 2006, 07:04 PM
I liked it.................................

Of course I didn't understood half of the words:lol: ;) :angel: :lol:

But I liked it

kinglear
Dec 8th, 2006, 10:06 PM
I liked it.................................

Of course I didn't understood half of the words:lol: ;) :angel: :lol:

But I liked it



Of course I didn't understood half of the words:lol: ;) :angel: :lol:

But I liked it[/QUOTE]


LOL...well I'm glad you liked it. I wish you could understand most of the words though, but it's all good.

Mathijs
Dec 8th, 2006, 10:13 PM
Well done Kinglear, love to read poems :)

Keep them coming :yeah:

Pilongo
Dec 9th, 2006, 02:46 PM
So tender! It's a great work.
Make sure this thing arrives to Lena. She's gonna love it.

kinglear
Dec 10th, 2006, 04:44 PM
So tender! It's a great work.
Make sure this thing arrives to Lena. She's gonna love it.

Awww you're too kind. I appreciate it ;) By the way, how would Lena see it? I'd love for her to see it though. :hearts: haha

Pilongo
Dec 14th, 2006, 02:00 PM
Awww you're too kind. I appreciate it ;) By the way, how would Lena see it? I'd love for her to see it though. :hearts: haha

Don't really know but maybe at her official website they can do something to help you getting the poem to her, maybe sending her a letter or something. I do really think it deserves to be delivered to the lady at which have been dedicated

http://eng.dementieva.ru/contacts/

kinglear
Dec 15th, 2006, 12:51 AM
Don't really know but maybe at her official website they can do something to help you getting the poem to her, maybe sending her a letter or something. I do really think it deserves to be delivered to the lady at which have been dedicated

http://eng.dementieva.ru/contacts/

oh ok cool. I just sent it to the adminsitrator of that site you posted. Thanks a lot for the info.

UDACHi
Dec 15th, 2006, 02:01 AM
that's a really good peom. i liked it a lot. do you write often?

kinglear
Dec 15th, 2006, 03:37 AM
that's a really good peom. i liked it a lot. do you write often?

Yes, I write all day, everyday. I'm in college to become a journalist. I'm looking for internships now, but that's what I love to do. I was an editor of my high school paper and college paper, all that stuff. I'm really glad you liked the poem. Check out my Martina Hingis poem: http://www.wtaworld.com/showthread.php?t=276816

I posted it in the Martina Hingis section, but unfortunately no one paid attention to it. haha Oh well. :)

UDACHi
Dec 15th, 2006, 04:04 AM
i like the martina one, also. i do prefer the elena one, though. ;)

good luck with journalism! i am also kind of interested in it, but i don't know. i'm only 14.

quasar
Dec 17th, 2006, 09:44 PM
I liked it! Specially the comparison to a mare and the diamond/princess bit.
And I even learned a new word: flaxen. :)

Keep'em coming!

Cheers, Merry Xmas and Joyeux Noel, all rolled into one,

Carlos