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Света_мой_№1
Nov 9th, 2008, 06:45 PM
well people here it is the poem thread.

I will start with 2 poems today and will look if I can post one every day cuz 6-7 weeks are a lot of days I dont know if I have enough poems to share. but will see.

here is the first one:

beautifull

In society these days
Youíre either too Ďfatí or too Ďthiní
Itís in the papers the magazines
No matter what you do, you canít win
The pressure on the youth
And even us adults
Itís gone beyond crazy
And someday itís gonna catapult
Into nothing but danger
Trouble for us all
Weíre seeing it already
Celebrities are beginning to fall
Into deeper pressure
And succumb to the pubic inhibitions
Of body image and behaviour
Gone are their ambitions
To be a role model
And not just a star
Theyíve forgotten themselves
And who they are
Whatever happened to the saying
ĎEach to his/her owní
Where is the respect
That used to be shown

All I can say
Is believe in who you are
Be proud of yourself
When you look in the mirror
YOU are whatís important
I hope you see the beauty
Of what is inside
That is what matters
Youíve nothing to hide
I believe in who you are
I donít care about your appearance
Your clothes, hairstyle, size
Thatís not my stance
Be true to yourself
Believe in how beautiful you are
Donít let anyone put you down
And you will go far!

Света_мой_№1
Nov 9th, 2008, 06:48 PM
ok and then the second one is a short one

Set it free!!!

So...
We all a lil crazy
I think you'll agree
I don't know about you
But especially me!
It's fun
To go a little wild
Keeping people amused
All the while!
I like to do mad
Random crazy things
And enjoy the laughter
And smiles it brings!
We all crazy inside
And we all crazy too
They like to escape
After we've had a 'few'!
Don't be afraid
To let loose and be merry
Let your crazy side out
Set it free!

Bероника
Nov 9th, 2008, 07:13 PM
hey mel,thanks for sharing.I liked reading both,but specially the first one,I found some parts of it very inspiring.

Света_мой_№1
Nov 9th, 2008, 07:59 PM
hey mel,thanks for sharing.I liked reading both,but specially the first one,I found some parts of it very inspiring.

Glad you like it. and happy it was inspiring to you it kinda was meant that way;)

Света_мой_№1
Nov 10th, 2008, 07:08 PM
my poem of today

True Friends

true friends are made to last
true friends you can have a blast
true friends will tell you straight
true friends will never hate
true friends will look out for you
true friends will always do
true friends will never use
true frinds will never abuse
true friends you can always trust
true friends are a must
true friends you know who you are
true friends are never too far
true friends will never lie
true friends are never sly
true friends will never hurt
true friends wont do the dirt
true friends will never betray
true friends are here to stay
true friends wont make you sad
true friends wont make you mad
true friends wont cause you strife
true friends are here for life

maryc
Nov 10th, 2008, 08:47 PM
Thanks for the poems!

Bероника
Nov 11th, 2008, 01:26 PM
thanks mel for posting ;)

Анна
Nov 12th, 2008, 08:22 PM
My daughter actually wrote this one :) She changed around a song she heard:

The World's Greatest

I am a river
I am a horse
Oh, I am a
cheetah
running
across the
land
Oh, I am an
eagle
flying in the
sky
oh, I am the
children
in their
homes
If anybody
asks you
who I am just
stand up tall
look'em in
the face and
say
I'm that
zebra in the
distance
I'm that bird
up in the sky
hey, I made it
I'm the world's
greatest
Oh, I'm that
tornado
twisting in
the sky
hey I made it
I'm the
world's
greatest

And one I wrote, but can't find a title for:

Where have you gone
oh the sun
cry like rain
damp behind my eyes
becomes colder
without you
bring back your breath
your kiss of summer heat
warm all the parts
I shan't speak of
the warm wet
but I remember you
lay me down
as the rain
cradles the leaves
onto their bed of earth

Anne

**By the way, Mel, I found all these "Funniest Home Videos" on YouTube, but they were captioned in Dutch :lol:, or at least what I think is Dutch. At least I don't have to understand a word to get the idea of what's going on :help:.

Anniemac
Nov 13th, 2008, 12:28 PM
Hey Mel,
You rock,:woohoo: Your first poem reminds of a song my favorite singer wrote. Her name is Natalie Merchant and the song is Tell Yourself. I think you might like that song.
That's also a great poem from your daughter Anne. :yeah:

Света_мой_№1
Nov 13th, 2008, 05:46 PM
[QUOTE=

**By the way, Mel, I found all these "Funniest Home Videos" on YouTube, but they were captioned in Dutch :lol:, or at least what I think is Dutch. At least I don't have to understand a word to get the idea of what's going on :help:.[/QUOTE]

if you send me the link I can try to explain. If you want to ofcourse. and I like both of the poems but a tittle for the last is hard to find I have to say.

Света_мой_№1
Nov 13th, 2008, 05:51 PM
Hey Mel,
You rock,:woohoo: Your first poem reminds of a song my favorite singer wrote. Her name is Natalie Merchant and the song is Tell Yourself. I think you might like that song.
That's also a great poem from your daughter Anne. :yeah:

I just heard the song and understand why you think that it has the same subject. when I hear the woman sing she sounds like alanis morrisette a little bit. but I like it.;)

Света_мой_№1
Nov 13th, 2008, 07:07 PM
The tides coming in on the shore

I've often wondered what life is about
I've wondered why it is so great
Why people believe in this god above us
And eternity, heaven and fate

Because I cant get it through to me
What’s the meaning of it to be
Where did it come from, how did it get here
It beats me

Because I know pigeons can fly and cheetahs can run
Adults can punish and kids can have fun
But what happens if pigeons swam in the sea
And cheetahs were called bumblebees

The tides coming in on the shore
What is the point of life any more
Is the future ahead or is it behind
The world is out there to find

The tides coming in on the shore
I can see an open door
Shall I walk or shall i stay
It’s now today

People in this world
Struggle night and day
They’re searching for that brightness
Searching for that light

The light that shows your hopes and dreams
The light that takes away your pain and screams
So you can move on, you can be free
We’re all searching, u him and me

The tides coming in on the shore
What’s the point of life anymore
Is the future ahead or is it behind
The world is out there to find

The tides coming in on the shore
I can see an open door
Shall I walk or shall I stay
It’s me to say

The sun has gone, I feel alone
There’s nothing on, no one on the phone
I want to get up, I want to go
But why can’t I stop saying no

It’s me to say
To say today

Света_мой_№1
Nov 15th, 2008, 05:40 PM
Mother Earth

birds and butterflies
rivers and mountains she creates
but u´ll never know
the next move she´ll make
u can try
but it is useless to ask why
cannot control her
she goes her own way

she rules until the end of time
she gives and she takes
she rules until the end of time
she goes her way

with every breath
and all the choices that we make
we r only passin´ through
on her way
i find my strength
believin´ that their soules live on
until the end of time
i´ll carry them with me

she rules until the end of time
she gives and she takes
she rules until the end of time
she goes her way

once u wil know my dear
u don´t have to fear
a new beginning always starts
at the end
once u will know my dear
u don´t have to fear
she goes her way

she rules until the end of time
she gives and she takes
she rules until the end of time
she goes her way

Bероника
Nov 16th, 2008, 10:18 AM
thanks again ;) I'm printing the ones I like the more.

Света_мой_№1
Nov 16th, 2008, 10:09 PM
ok I told before I didnt make a sveta poem yet today I tried and was harder then I thought when I am writing about her there is to much I want to write down it all gets mixed up this is what I end up with today:

~SVETA~

Watching her grow
With her amazing soul
She is the truest person
Youíll ever know

I learned so much
From her way of life
She made me realize
All my strengths

She is very unique
She shares so much
Cause she cares
About all of us

Iím glad to know
There are still people like her
Cause without her
Tennis wouldnít be complete

She gives a different vibe to the court
Walking around with headphones
Listening to rap and hip-hop
Still You're always on the top

She will keep on fighting
That why she gets her high rankings
Getting trough some changes
But never scared to face it

Thats why we'll keep on loving her
Whatever her choices will be
And thatís just the easy part
But we do it with all our heart



and maybe I still forgot something let me know what you think.

Bероника
Nov 17th, 2008, 03:40 PM
Mel,writing a poem about Sveta might be difficult because there are many interesting and lovable aspects about her,but your poem is balanced I find as you talk about her as a player,as a person and the effect she causes on fans,the 3 more important reasons why we are all here.

Thanks,it's a beautiful poem.Maybe you coud send it to her when we find out her new address.I'm sure she'll feel honored ;)

Анна
Nov 17th, 2008, 03:42 PM
I really like this, Mel :).
I love her character; a lot of courage to leave Russia when barely a teenager, the fact that she seems to appreciate her fans the most of all the players, complete ability to be herself, a sense of humour, and unafraid of changes and growth. I think she has a strong faith, too; I always see her with a cross necklace.

I know we appreciate the physical beauty :angel:, but character is what is most important.

Anne

Света_мой_№1
Nov 18th, 2008, 06:31 PM
for the next sveta poem wich I think will be better I will use what has been posted above but when people know more please let me know maybe I use the poem make it a bit longer or maybe I start all over again but it will be in the same mind state if you know what I mean.

and when we have the adress I will put the poem in my letter and send it to her. thats why I would like you all to give some honest thoughts about the poems. and ideas cuz when it is written down I can cross those things away and have everything in my poem.

also if you want to when I write te letter and we have the adress I think the poem would have more meaning when I put under that some of the names of sveta fans so she knows its not only me thinking this way but you really have to love the poem and stand behind it. so I was thinking that I write under the poem written by melanie and then under that sveta fans who agreed with me and then the list with names.

I will try to write the poem before the season starts so I have so time to really think about it.

Света_мой_№1
Nov 18th, 2008, 08:56 PM
my poem of today found myself going trough a lot of emotions lately so feld like posting this one



Emotions
Love is the hardest thing to forget
But yet its hardest thing to find,
Hate rips you apart from the inside,
But yet it teaches you to be kind.

Trust gets broken by the people you love,
But still you give it with all of your heart,
Fear controls you and distrupts your life,
But still you can overcome it and restart.

Hope gets crushed and maims you,
Yet it gives you the strength to live,
Despair leaves you feeling lonely and lost
Yet it always shows you an alternative.

Anger detroys your heart & your soul,
As you shoot people down like a gun,
Acceptance will make you stong again,
As it repairs all the damage thats done.

Bероника
Nov 19th, 2008, 04:00 PM
That's very gentle from you to want to write fan names under your Sveta poem,but you were the one who wrote it.I wouldn't feel right if you wrote mine because all I did was give you my oppinion about it.I don't know how others feel about this.But again,it's very nice from you!


I love your last poem too,by the way ;)

Света_мой_№1
Nov 19th, 2008, 05:58 PM
well I will write under the poem that I wrote it and then under that I write something like and these are sveta fans who als read the poem and agree with it and then the list of names but I will say I wrote it. I just tell in the letter that we have a poem thread where I post a lot and that I share my poems there and you all saw it and agreed with it but If you dont want it I can understand thats ok

Bероника
Nov 19th, 2008, 06:06 PM
well I will write under the poem that I wrote it and then under that I write something like and these are sveta fans who als read the poem and agree with it and then the list of names but I will say I wrote it. I just tell in the letter that we have a poem thread where I post a lot and that I share my poems there and you all saw it and agreed with it but If you dont want it I can understand thats ok

No,that's fine.It's a good idea.I didn't understand it that way the first time,sorry.

I hope you are better Mel :kiss: ;)

Света_мой_№1
Nov 19th, 2008, 06:51 PM
well today I talked to my mum about it and it made me a bit calmer but still not in my rythem lets put it that way.
so today a poem of my mum.

Mum

I sometimes wonder if you ever realise,
just how wonderful you are.
How much you really mean to me,
and how you shine brighter then a star.

If i ever need a hand i know just where to go,
It may be on the phone, or an actual place
but i know that everything will be alright
when i see your face.

I may not always show you
just how much i care
or how thankful that i am
that youre always there.

Im so grateful that youre you,
more then words can say.
Yet i'm trying to put it down
to thank you in a way.

Im sorry for when i hurt you
and when i make you cry
But ill always be you girl
I dont ever wanna say good bye.

Perfection is something people strive to find
Not many find a perfect one yet i have mine
these are my parents
who are just so kind.

Everybody loves you-yet me more then most
Coz youre always here
to helo me and give up
the thing that you want the most.

Анна
Nov 19th, 2008, 09:19 PM
:hug: I also hope you feel better soon, Mel. I'm here to listen if you ever need to "talk". I'm sure Vero is also.

This one moved me very much. My mother passed many years ago, and my father just passed in September. I miss them every day.

Anne

Света_мой_№1
Nov 20th, 2008, 09:33 PM
:hug: I also hope you feel better soon, Mel. I'm here to listen if you ever need to "talk". I'm sure Vero is also.

This one moved me very much. My mother passed many years ago, and my father just passed in September. I miss them every day.

Anne

well it got worse today but I well get trough it for sure!!!

But sad to hear your parents arent around anymore. somethimes you wish your parents would back off but in times like this I am glad they are around. and to get to my mum its hard but with a poem it works sometimes. I wont get into it that much cuz to do it on a forum where sometimes not sveta fans come I think it is to private for that if you want I can do it on private messages but wont be boring when you dont want to.

Света_мой_№1
Nov 20th, 2008, 09:39 PM
Peace

Thoughts and dreams pushed aside
my fears have taken their place
I realise the horrors of this world
as tears fall from my face

these tragedies so close to me
I dont feel I can cope
once a world full of promises
once filled with so much hope

what has been done is done
nothing can change that at all
we must act against the violence
or we must continue to fall

we are so blind to the fact
theres so much left to learn
until we decide to fix our mistakes
our hearts will continue to burn

feeling helpless and afraid
I cannot change the past
but if we work together
maybe this violence wont last


tomorrow I wanted to post a poem I wrote when my friend past away cuz then it is 3 years ago but dont know If I should do that cuz its a sad one just let me know??

Анна
Nov 20th, 2008, 10:33 PM
This is why I have hope that younger people will be smarter than we have been. Sometimes I really fear for the future, but you just have to have faith.

Anne

HybridTheory
Nov 21st, 2008, 02:44 PM
Lovely thread guys :) good poems Mel, well done :hug:

Bероника
Nov 21st, 2008, 04:14 PM
Mel,if it's ok for you to post it,then post it. :hug: :kiss:

Света_мой_№1
Nov 21st, 2008, 07:06 PM
Moving On

There’s never a right time
To say goodbye
It’s never fine
For someone to die
The shock hits you
You go numb
Not knowing what to do
Never expecting to lose someone
Who’s been there
For so long
You feel stripped and bare
Finding it hard to stay strong

The tears may come
If so, let them fall
But for some
None, nothing at all
That doesn’t mean
You’re not hurting inside
If anything
You’re just trying to hide
The pain you feel
Because if you do
It will all be real
It will all be true

Nobody wants
To lose someone dear
Their death haunts
You want them near
The memories
Videos and pictures
We need these
As reminders
To banish the fear
That you will forget
You need to keep them clear
Don’t want to be upset

But want to and need
To remember that laugh and smile
So you can be freed
From the constant denial
To accept that it’s real
They’re not coming home
Is upsetting to feel
They’ve left you alone
You’ve gone through
The rainbow of emotions
What’s left to do?
There’s no magic potion
To make grief go away
You’ll always feel something
It’s there to stay
Sometimes hiding

Like you can be happy
And just like that
You see
Where you’re at
How far you’ve gone
Without thinking of them
You’re angry all of a sudden
How could you let it happen?
You’re scared
That one day you won’t
Have cared
That you don’t
But it’s natural
Don’t worry yourself
You’re normal
If anything it’s a help

Life does go on
Just take each day as it comes
Let it happen
Slowly the pain numbs
You feel it ease
It’s not as hard anymore
Your heart sees
What it couldn’t before
That it’s ok to let go
Of that person
It has to be so
So that they may move on

Live in memory
Of who they were
Unlock the key
Discover the treasure
Their life was the gold
An amazing story
Waiting to be told
No more worry
As their memory lives on
No longer can we
See them as gone
But happy and free
Instead we celebrate
Who they were
Their life though late
Was the one true treasure

Bероника
Nov 21st, 2008, 07:18 PM
Last poem is very touching,Mel :kiss:

Анна
Nov 21st, 2008, 07:33 PM
:hug: That's a beautiful tribute to your friend. Thank you for sharing.

Anne

Света_мой_№1
Nov 21st, 2008, 08:24 PM
glad you liked it

Света_мой_№1
Nov 22nd, 2008, 06:36 PM
be you

move on over
let me show
what you dont know
you will never know
if you dont let me shine
in the lime light
so mover on over
get ur a$$ out of my way
I will be the one to show
I will show all the girls the way to go
the way to be
just not like me
the way to be
the best way to be
is just to be you
you know its true

Света_мой_№1
Nov 22nd, 2008, 06:57 PM
changed the sveta poem just a little bit dont know if it is better this way let me know and again if you notice there is something missing let me know.

~SVETA~

Watching her grow
With her amazing soul
She is the truest person
Youíll ever know

I learned so much
From her way of life
She made me realize
All my strengths

She is very unique
She shares so much
Cause she cares
About all of us

Iím glad to know
There are still people like her
Cause without her
Tennis wouldnít be complete

She gives a different vibe to the court
Walking around with headphones
Listening to r&b and hip-hop
Still You're always yourself on the top

She will keep on fighting
That why she gets her high rankings
Getting trough some changes
But never scared to face it

Thats why we'll keep on loving her
Whatever her choices will be
And thatís just the easy part
But we do it with all our heart

the blue words are all I have changed

Анна
Nov 23rd, 2008, 02:26 PM
Captures her uniqueness and courage in change :). I like it.

Anne

Света_мой_№1
Nov 23rd, 2008, 07:53 PM
my poem to vero and anne

My fresh start
I'm trying to do what vero and anne said
To get me through this tough time
I'm erasing all the bad memories
All the good thoughts going into my mind
I will get through this
I will find the strength from somewhere
I won't give in to these thoughts
If not for me then for the one's who care

I'm looking beyond the grey clouds
To the sun shining through
I'm gonna make a better life for me
With or without you
I can't keep going down-hill
I don't wannabe another statistic
I wanna get through this
So I'm gonna stay Optimistic

For every job reject
I'll take it in my stride
'Cause at least I got friends & family
Here by my side
I'll let fate take play it's part
& follow the golden path
I'm not gonna cry anymore
I'm gonna try to laugh

To many souls are taken
Due to depression & bad karma today
I'm gonna make my life what I want
I can see my path & I am on my way
My brave face is firmly on
I've taken a very deep breath
So now it's time to help myself
& take my first step

So here I go out into the big old world
This time I'll protect myself
I will start to look after my health
No longer will I let anybody
Have a hold on my heart
No longer will I go down-hill
From now onwards this is my fresh start!!

thanks for listening to me!!!

Анна
Nov 23rd, 2008, 08:38 PM
No need to thank me :). If you keep that positive attitude, and put in the hard work, I know you can reach any challenge you set for yourself. Just like Sveta, you can start over and go for it :).

Anne

Bероника
Nov 23rd, 2008, 08:50 PM
I like very much your poem,Mel.It's good that you can transfere all these emotions into a poem.As Anne said,no need to thank :kiss:

Света_мой_№1
Nov 24th, 2008, 07:54 PM
Silent Angel

The Silent Angel above the ground
Soft touch on your shoulder guardes your life
Gentle whisper close to your ear
Her wings will wrap all of your fears

Showing the way to a safe cloud for you
That is always shining to take away your gloom
Her hand on your hand
Invisible, but always there

The open Angel's heart
In yours, inside, not far
The way is always long,
But each your step, she follows

You're always a child in her arms
She always hears your quite cry
Understands your each tear
Lets them flow down your cheeks

The Silent Angel above the ground
Lets you fall and always gets you up
Hide under her wings,
Let yourself be weak, dream.

Анна
Nov 25th, 2008, 06:24 AM
I love the pictures you draw with words, so much more than mine. I love this because I believe all of us have an angel who lives inside us, if we would just slow down and get quiet enough to feel that touch.

Anne

Света_мой_№1
Nov 25th, 2008, 05:59 PM
yes believe so too that everybody has an angel on their shoulder thats why I have a tattoo of it on my shoulder.

great you like it by the way I am running out of poems trying to make new ones but wont work when I have to it only works when the moment is there.

Света_мой_№1
Nov 25th, 2008, 06:57 PM
Journeys Waiting To Be Discovered

Standing around waiting
Waiting to cross the divide
The line that draws a track
A trail set within my mind
New beginnings that may not have an ending
Something`s that are worth a try
I guess if I never give it a chance
It will always stick in my mind (why)

Dreams inside waiting to come true
Ambitions that are always cast a side
Things I`ve once before started
But forgotten once life started to unwind
Places that I dream about
Journeys yet to be discovered
All the things inside I want to explore
This is my life thats waiting to be uncovered

"Do it whilst your young"
Words upon the older generations lips
Go & show the world what your made off
Mam always says I should sign up to work on the cruise ships

I`m at that age where I want independence
I want to to make my own decisions
I want to be out in the big bad world
I want to stand up for myself without living under my parents conditions
Don`t get me wrong I love them dearly
But I`m the oldest the first to leave home
I know I`m lucky my home will always be there for me
If things don`t work out on my own

I just want the freedom
Freedom to be me
Freedom to explore my dreams
Freedom to run of into places I want to be
I don`t want to live in this place forever
The same thing day in day out
I feel inside theres more to life than this
Here in this small town is not what i`m about

I need to follow my dreams & ambitions
I think it`s the only way I`ll ever find my destiny
I know out there somewhere in this world
There is something & somebody that will bring the best out in me

I guess everybody paints the perfect place
A place we all dream about in the back off our minds
I guess it`s time to start searching
My perfect place I need to find

Sometimes people say "Home Is Where The Heart Is"
But I know there is more to life than what i see
I need to fly the nest & spread my wings
I need to understand where it is I want to be

Bероника
Nov 25th, 2008, 09:45 PM
thanks Mel for the last 2 poems and don't worry,no need to force writing it.We understand you need inspiration moment for it.

Света_мой_№1
Nov 26th, 2008, 07:11 PM
music

put on my headphones, turn the stereo up loud,
switch between some R&B, Rock and hip-hop,
got a wine in my hand and I’m dancing the shadows away,
with the guitars, and the drums beat, I slowly sway,

all the troubles they package themselves into squares,
all the hurtful words, they don’t ever touch the air,
the tears don’t fall, the eyes they close for sentiment,
music, above the par, of all the poems I have penned,

rocking slowly back and forth within a world of my own,
the hectic life outside my room, to myself is unknown,
music, is like stuffing, it fills the empty void and hole,
music, is like the grim reaper, it frees my captured soul.

Света_мой_№1
Nov 27th, 2008, 05:39 PM
I hope to ever read it out loud for the love of my life


A shining star

Looking out, on the cold, dark winter night
Glancing at this one star on the black sky
Sparkling with such beauty and grace
With a little luck it will outshine even the rays of the
sun
- A shining star

Breathtaking beauty, becoming notorious
But even when so powerful it would never
step on any toes, it has only goodness within itself
Close to perfect, unattainable though
-A shining star

Same thing with you, you too light up the dark
When you smile you outshine everybody else
The star may be the finest thing on the sky
But you are the most beautiful thing alive on Earth
-You are my shining star

Bероника
Nov 27th, 2008, 07:42 PM
wow that's beautiful Mel

Света_мой_№1
Nov 27th, 2008, 09:57 PM
working on the sveta poem again not sure about the part I added let me know what you think??


~SVETA~

Watching her grow
With her amazing soul
She is the truest person
You’ll ever know

I learned so much
From her way of life
She made me realize
All my strengths

She is very unique
She shares so much
Cause she cares
About all of us

I’m glad to know
There are still people like her
Cause without her
Tennis wouldn’t be complete

She gives a different vibe to the court
Walking around with headphones
Listening to r&b and hip-hop
Still You're always yourself on the top

She will keep on fighting
That why she gets her high rankings
Getting trough some changes
But never scared to face it

Thats why we'll keep on loving her
Whatever her choices will be
And that’s just the easy part
But we do it with all our heart

I know we all look up to you
more than anyone we'll ever know
you've touched us in every single way
and make us laugh at times, too

most of us would give anything, to be closer to you
there’s no way to say it, but I can give it a go
you've touched every one of us
that’s all we want you to know

the blue part is added

Света_мой_№1
Nov 28th, 2008, 07:33 PM
~ A Song To every Life ~

There’s a song to every life
It follows you around
It echoes through your heart
It can be a lonely, lonely sound
It will bring you up or tear you down
Mine is a song without many words
It has a beautiful tone
That only I have heard

As I dance through life
My lyrics continue to grow
My song is becoming real
And I’m waiting for my solo
For the light to shine on me
Baby just one time
I want to be
The one you notice
The star that you see
Shinning brightly

Sometimes the track skips
And I get lost along the way
I get knocked off my feet
But I know I’ll be ok
Cause to the beat of the drum
I find a way to march on
I may be dancing on stings
That are nearly gone
But when the guitar fades out
The piano plays on

As I dance through life
My lyrics continue to grow
My song is becoming real
And I’m waiting for my solo
For the light to shine on me
Baby just one time
I want to be
The one you notice
The star that you see
Shinning brightly

Believe me
There’s a song to every life
And if it ever feels wrong
If you can’t hear the music
If you don’t like the song
Honey just remember
That only you can write the track
Listen to your inner voice
She’ll help you find your way back

As you dance through life
Your lyrics will grow
Your song becomes real
And it’s time for your solo
The light is shinning on you
This is your chance
You chance to be
The one that they notice
The start they all see
Shinning brightly
Cause there’s a song to every life

Анна
Nov 28th, 2008, 07:51 PM
Wow Mel, you are gifted with words. I am never tired of the pictures you paint.

The blue part in Sveta's poem doesn't fit with the rhythmn of the rest of the poem-the "beats" per line is off. Maybe you can work with it; I don't feel right playing around with it unless you asked me to.

Anne

Света_мой_№1
Nov 28th, 2008, 07:55 PM
no please do I kinda agree with you but these are things I wanted to get in the poem but will work on it because meaning of the added part needs to be in it

Света_мой_№1
Nov 28th, 2008, 08:00 PM
~SVETA~

Watching her grow
With her amazing soul
She is the truest person
You’ll ever know

I learned so much
From her way of life
She made me realize
All my strengths

She is very unique
She shares so much
Cause she cares
About all of us

I’m glad to know
There are still people like her
Cause without her
Tennis wouldn’t be complete

She gives a different vibe to the court
Walking around with headphones
Listening to r&b and hip-hop
Still You're always yourself on the top

She will keep on fighting
That’s why she gets her high rankings
Getting trough some changes
But never scared to face it

Thats why we'll keep on loving her
Whatever her choices will be
And that’s just the easy part
But we do it with all our heart







we all look up to you
more than you’ll ever know
you've showed some great tennis
and make us laugh at times, too

most of us would give anything, to be closer to you
there’s no way to say it, but I can give it a go
you've touched every one of us
that’s all we want you to know


maybe like this then just trying and not really working this week but I feel these are things that need to be said

Анна
Nov 28th, 2008, 08:09 PM
Or this:

most of us would give anything, to be closer to you
there’s no way to say it, but I can give it a go
you've touched every one of us
that’s all we want you to know (your version)

We would give anything
To be closer to you;
There's no way to say it,
But I can give it a go

You've touched every one of us,
Is what you need to know.

Sometimes it just doesn't come for awhile-you can't force it.

Света_мой_№1
Nov 28th, 2008, 08:15 PM
thank you why couldnt I just come up with that I was so rapped up but the four lines in each part but that is briljant.

but the part of 4 lines above it do you think that belongs in it like that too

Анна
Nov 28th, 2008, 08:51 PM
we all look up to you
more than you’ll ever know
you've showed some great tennis
and make us laugh at times, too (your version)

Yeah, I'm not sure-it's not what I think that matters, but what you think, after all. And sometimes when you try to make a poem fit all the rules and look all pretty, it loses its soul. Think e.e. cummings, whose sentences don't even match up. Don't drain the soul out of your poetry.

That said, I did think of this:

We look up to you
More than you know,
You've shown us laughter and tears
And great tennis, too! but I really don't like this myself.

Anne

Анна
Nov 28th, 2008, 08:56 PM
Added, because this is one of my favourite poems by anyone, but it is e e cummings. If someone had told him to clean up the puctuation, or straighten out the sentences, this would have lost all its soul, in my opinion:

i like my body when it is with your
body. It is so quite a new thing.
Muscles better and nerves more.
i like your body. i like what it does,
i like its hows. i like to feel the spine
of your body and its bones, and the trembling
-firm-smooth ness and which i will
again and again and again
kiss, i like kissing this and that of you,
i like,, slowly stroking the, shocking fuzz
of your electric fur, and what-is-it comes
over parting flesh . . . . And eyes big Love-crumbs,

and possibly i like the thrill

of under me you quite so new

Света_мой_№1
Nov 28th, 2008, 09:38 PM
ok I get what you mean

I think I am going with this

~SVETA~

Watching her grow
With her amazing soul
She is the truest person
You’ll ever know

I learned so much
From her way of life
She made me realize
All my strengths

She is very unique
She shares so much
Cause she cares
About all of us

I’m glad to know
There are still people like her
Cause without her
Tennis wouldn’t be complete

She gives a different vibe to the court
Walking around with headphones
Listening to r&b and hip-hop
Still You're always yourself on the top

She will keep on fighting
That’s why she gets her high rankings
Getting trough some changes
But never scared to face it

Thats why we'll keep on loving her
Whatever her choices will be
And that’s just the easy part
But we do it with all our heart

we all look up to you
more than you’ll ever know
you've showed some great tennis
and make us laugh at times, too
We would give anything
To be closer to you,
There's no way to say it,
But I can give it a go

You've touched every one of us,
Is what you need to know.

not really happy with the blue lines but I dont think it will mather that much it still tells us what we think and nothing is perfect but if I come up with something I will post it

svetaisthebest
Nov 29th, 2008, 09:51 AM
wow all the poems posted were great:eek: :worship:
mel,i really love the first one you posted and I like the one about Sveta too:)

Света_мой_№1
Nov 29th, 2008, 07:52 PM
thank you very much

Света_мой_№1
Nov 30th, 2008, 05:16 PM
Perfect?

Leaves crunching under your feet
waves crashing with an in sync beat

The sun casts a glow on all the tall towers
and the scent of the air is that of fresh flowers

Laughing of school children as the school bell rings
Squirrels scurry and the blue bird sings

Shop keepers smile as they continue their sweeping
Cars silently drive by no mad honking or beeping

Never any problems here, so no need for any laws
and their are homes for every single set of paws

Games are won and Games are lost
but they will all end in the same cost

A cheerful hand shake or a slap on the back
All working together in one like pack

Why are our fine homelands so far from this perfect?
Because of the people and the ones who work it.

Анна
Nov 30th, 2008, 06:23 PM
You're right, the world feels so far from perfect and so far from even a good place sometimes. Many times I despair that we could ever get along. But, I don't think we would want perfection even if we could have it. I believe it's through our troubles and hard times that we can bring out our best.

I'm not sure any of that made sense...

Anne

Света_мой_№1
Nov 30th, 2008, 06:58 PM
it makes sence but it could be more in balance I think

Анна
Nov 30th, 2008, 07:10 PM
it makes sence but it could be more in balance I think

Oh, I agree with you. I keep trying for that balance within myself, to say nothing of the world.

I just don't read much of the news anymore; it brings me so down.

Anne

Света_мой_№1
Nov 30th, 2008, 08:11 PM
yeah it is always bad news not fun. it can bring me down to. last time I watched was 2 days ago when my friend died it was on the news again sad news but I knew him and police didnt let go a lot so watched the news and found out he only wanted to help a woman in a fight with her husband he abused her but then the husband got mad on my friend and got him with a knife.

Анна
Nov 30th, 2008, 08:28 PM
:sad: I hope that man was sent to prison, at least for some justice. I am so sorry.

Anne

Света_мой_№1
Dec 2nd, 2008, 06:53 PM
well they got him right away he is still waiting to hear how long he will be in jail but to jail he goes for sure

Света_мой_№1
Dec 2nd, 2008, 06:57 PM
I Believe…

When I was a child
I used to stare into the sky
Wishing on every star
Hoping for the beauty
Of a life
With an everlasting glow
And I used to tell myself
That only angels could make it snow
That’s how we know they’re out there
With every single snow flake
They show us that they care
That’s what kept me going
When life didn’t seem fair
And I still believe

I believe in fairytales
The white picket fence
The yellow brick road
I believe in happiness and I know
That all that glitters is not gold
But I believe in angels and I know
That this world is mine to hold
As long as I believe

At night when I sleep
I fall into a world
A place where I am free
I am free to fly
Free to cry
Free to be everything
I’ve ever wanted to be
I believe in happiness
In ever lasting love
And one-day cupid
Will send me a kiss
A kiss from an angel
Sent from above
And every time I fall down
I wipe my tears upon my sleeve
Look up to the sky and tell myself
That one day I’ll make it
Cause I believe

Анна
Dec 3rd, 2008, 05:07 PM
This one is like song lyrics ;). I needed something uplifting; thank you.

Света_мой_№1
Dec 3rd, 2008, 05:40 PM
youre welcome glad I lift you up:p

Света_мой_№1
Dec 3rd, 2008, 05:41 PM
Slow Dance

Have you ever watched kids
On a merry-go-round?

Or listened to the rain
Slapping on the ground?

Ever followed a butterfly's erratic flight?
Or gazed at the sun into the fading night?

You better slow down.
Don't dance so fast.
Time is short.
The music won't last.


Do you run through each day
On the fly?

When you ask How are you?
Do you hear the reply?

When the day is done
Do you lie in your bed


With the next hundred chores
Running through your head?


You'd better slow down
Don't dance so fast.
Time is short.
The music won't last.

Ever told your child,
We'll do it tomorrow?

And in your haste,
Not see his sorrow?

Ever lost touch,
Let a good friendship die

Cause you never had time
To call and say,"Hi"

You'd better slow down.
Don't dance so fast.
Time is short.
The music won't last.

When you run so fast to get somewhere
You miss half the fun of getting there.

When you worry and hurry through your day,
It is like an unopened gift.... Thrown away.

Life is not a race.
Do take it slower
Hear the music
Before the song is over.

Bероника
Dec 3rd, 2008, 07:33 PM
thanks mel,I liked much the last one and honestly I should follow your advice more often :o

Света_мой_№1
Dec 4th, 2008, 05:34 PM
well the idea for the poems started when a few days ago my dad wanted to fill his car up and he has a diesel car but he puts benzine(is that english?) in it. cuz he was in a hurry. so I thought a lot of people hurry lately so well thats how I came up the idea.

Света_мой_№1
Dec 5th, 2008, 06:15 PM
Beautiful Angel

Be strong my sweet, little angel
and spread your wings and fly.
I know you have to do this
although it will make me cry.
There is no way that you can stay here,
so there's no point in asking why.


You are my beautiful angel,
beautiful as can be.
I have to let you go
although I want you to be here with me.
"Why do you have to leave", was my desperate question.
You just shed all your love over me and said:
"Someday you will see."


Now you are in a place beyond my mind,
it's the place where your soul is finally free.
But remember that I am still here
and I need you to watch over me.
I still don't understand but I trust that someday I will see.

Света_мой_№1
Dec 7th, 2008, 07:27 PM
Smile This Love


Let me begin with a smile from which I know no resistance
When the simple thought of you become the opening fence
And I know it's not an easy path on any of the both sides
If you allow me to try I will give you a reason to fight
If you allow me to ease your pain I'll try to make it right
And cherishing our chance will be your only reason to cry

For every smile taken I would take more
And I'd give more back if ever it fades
For every loving given I would give more
But I'd never take it back or let it fade

Let me continue with a promise to always stay true
To show you I can be this one who would die for you
I want to be this only person you will ever need
From whom in case of a separation you would bleed
From a side of the world to the other one I'd leer
But I swear that to be back to you I could creep

For every smile taken I would take more
And I'd give more back if ever it fades
For every loving given I would give more
But I'd never take it back or let it fade

Let me end with a reminder of this smile upon my face
It appeared first when the thought of you let a trace
Within my mind where my hopes and dreams found light
Like the one that lighten my days as well as my nights
And show me right from wrong when I forfeit my sight
As for the same that carries my heart above in light

For every smile taken I would take more
And I'd give more back if ever it fades
For every loving given I would give more
But I'd never take it back or let it fade

For every smile taken
For every loving given
I will smile this love
And never let it fade
For every smile
Smile this love
For every smile

LanaKuz
Dec 13th, 2008, 04:30 AM
meltjuuuh, thanks for sharing your poems! I like all of them, especially "Slow Dance" :clap2:

Света_мой_№1
Dec 13th, 2008, 05:17 PM
thank you glad you like it

Света_мой_№1
Jan 29th, 2009, 05:58 PM
ok it has been a long time but wrote another poem today.


Selfish Humans

For once it would be nice to turn on TV
To watch all our accomplishments, all we have achieved
See humans caring, humans laughing, humans sharing
Opening our eyes, and in what we believe
How did we become so selfish
Not to care about a strangers soul
When did the sun stop rising
Does anyone really care anymore?
The news only shows tears and pain
As priority information, are they insane?
Why re-enforce the behaviour, we’re immune
Can’t you see, don’t you know?
How did we become so selfish
Not to care about a strangers soul
When did the sun stop rising
Does anyone really care anymore?
When will we learn it’s not just the words we use
But how we choose to use them and
how we choose to speak them
Makes the difference between being human or being selfish
What’s your choice gonna be?
How did we become so selfish
Not to care about a strangers soul
When did the sun stop rising
Does anyone really care anymore?

Анна
Jan 29th, 2009, 07:18 PM
I don't even look at news anymore, in any form. It feels like no one's good to each other anymore.

Bероника
Jan 29th, 2009, 07:38 PM
Thanks,Mel ;)

The poem is a sad,but true.

I also don't look news anymore.You only find negativity in them.

Света_мой_№1
Jan 30th, 2009, 03:38 PM
well I dont look at it anymore for this reason but my parents do so and sometimes you just get some bad news like I already told vero that this week there was a 20 year old creep he painted his face black and white. and walked in a childeren school (it not really a school but it is for baby and childeren till age of 4) and he had lots of knifes with him he stabed every child and teacher he saw there where 2 dead babys one dead teachers and 12 really bad injured baby's. and that I just saw when my parents watched so I came up with this poem

Анна
Jan 30th, 2009, 06:39 PM
:sad: oh my god. I am so sorry.

This wouldn't have been the same incident we heard about, but it was in Belgium? If not, that makes two such things very close :sad:

Света_мой_№1
Feb 1st, 2009, 03:06 PM
well I was wrong it was in belgium but there where dutch kids on that school I just came in, in the middle of the story so didnt get that. but you are true it was in belgium it was that story.
strange it is also in america news.

Света_мой_№1
Feb 1st, 2009, 07:11 PM
just a short one

Beauty

Like a star in the sky
Like a melody passing by

Like love at first sight
Like the moon shining bright

Like getting a hug
Like a cute puppy dog

Like a candle’s shine
Like just feeling fine

Like helping the weak
Like feeling unique

Like cherry red lips
Like your lover touching your hips

Like seeing someone you’ve missed
Like being kissed

All this is beauty
Something I hope you will see…

Анна
Feb 1st, 2009, 07:21 PM
Well, wow ;). I like those examples ;).

Света_мой_№1
Feb 15th, 2009, 08:22 PM
ok people since I have a adress now to right to sveta I am going to write a letter and put the poem I have posted earlier with it.

this poem:

~SVETA~

Watching you grow
With your amazing soul
you ‘re the truest person
we’ll ever know

We learned so much
From your way of life
you made us realize
All our strengths

You’re very unique
You share so much
Cause we care
It’s interesting to all of us

we’re glad to know
There are still people like you
Cause without you
Tennis wouldn’t be complete

You give a different vibe to the court
Walking around with headphones
Listening to r&b and hip-hop
Still You're always yourself on the top

You will keep on fighting
That’s why you get your high rankings
Getting through some changes
But never scared to face it

That’s why we'll keep on loving you
Whatever your choices may be
And that’s just the easy part
But we do it with all our heart

we all look up to you
more then you’ll ever know
you've showed some great tennis
and made us laugh at times, too

We would give anything
To be closer to you,
There's no way to say it,
But I can give it a go

You've touched every one of us,
Is what you need to know.

(can someone look for the mistakes I made in spelling it)so I wont send on full of mistakes.

and then I told also that I would write all the names of the people wo agree with the poem under it so if You want it at your name to the list.

I will write that it is my poem but that the persons who I have written under it agree with it.

ok let me know!

Bероника
Feb 15th, 2009, 08:41 PM
cool mel ;) I don't see any mistakes in it but maybe anyone who speaks good english can tell it for sure.

Add my name,please and of course thanks for including our names

Анна
Feb 15th, 2009, 08:46 PM
Very nice, mel ;). I checked it over and couldn't find any mistakes.

Oh and put me down as well ;).

Света_мой_№1
Feb 15th, 2009, 09:36 PM
ok coowl

the list:

anne,
vero,



and just add if you want I probable will make my letter next weekend and then post it on monday so you can add your name till then

dearg
Feb 16th, 2009, 01:16 AM
Hi Mel, near the end (8th verse down) you have "More then" it should be "More than" but it's perfect!:cool: Goodnight all:zzz:

Света_мой_№1
Feb 16th, 2009, 02:57 PM
ok thank you

Света_мой_№1
Feb 16th, 2009, 05:39 PM
for mummy
If I could take the doubt away from you,
And put it all on me,
Believe me I would, just to make you happy.
I can’t bare to see you like that,
Just laying in that bed,
Waiting for something to happen,
As dark thoughts run through your head.
from seeing those stories on TV,
Sitting there thinking it won’t happen to me.
Just when you get better,
You fall back down again,
Never know how you feel.
In silence you lay all the same.
You used to be such a happy person,
Never a day would you be sad.
I remember it like it was yesterday,
All the good times that we had.
I know there is a god,
I sit down and pray for you.
I dont want you to hurt any more,
I want back the old you.

Света_мой_№1
Feb 17th, 2009, 09:40 PM
ok this is strange I posted this poem twice because I didnt saw it posted then until few minutes ago it was only one time on the forum and now it was posted 2 times so I deleted one

Bероника
Feb 18th, 2009, 05:34 PM
oh that's a sad one,mel :hug:

but again thanks for sharing!

Света_мой_№1
Feb 18th, 2009, 05:38 PM
I promisse next one will be a happy one again

Bероника
Feb 18th, 2009, 05:46 PM
if the sad ones help you,mel you should write what you feel ;) :kiss:

Анна
Feb 18th, 2009, 06:05 PM
That's right; you don't have to write happy ones for us if you don't feel that way :hug:.

Света_мой_№1
Feb 18th, 2009, 07:21 PM
ok thank you.

you are to good for me

Света_мой_№1
Apr 15th, 2009, 09:46 PM
ok I havent been writting for a while and today out of nothing I wrote 4 poems

here is the first one:

WRITING POEMS

Playing with the notion
Of whatever comes to mind
Putting pen to paper
you see what you can find

Going to extremes
To make the words rhyme
Whilst finding hidden messages
At the same time

One may choose to write
About the life of love
Others use the craft
To best describe a dove

Staring through the window
Of an unchartered soul
It's amazing how poetry
Plays an important role

For no matter what is written
Or implied from the start
When someone writes a poem
You know it's from the heart

Interpretation can be
A little bit deceiving
When you think you've hit the nail
Upon uncovering its meaning

Every single story
Results from personal gain
Although most of you will argue
It's resulted from the pain

A star crossed lover will write
That on that fateful night
A monster from the deep
Stole their heart their soul their light

A romantic true to heart
Will want the world to hear
Of the true love that they've found
And how their life now feels so clear

So now you know the story
About the paper and the pen
And if you listen to your soul
The adventure never ends

Света_мой_№1
Apr 15th, 2009, 09:47 PM
the second one

pets
as they grow older,
there patient and sweet
a scratch on the head's as good as a treat
you cuddle each day,
though the days go to fast
and you hope with your heart that each ones not the last.

and then the day comes,
when you must say good-bye
you stroke the course old fur
and try not to cry
your friend had departed,
its not possibly true
but the person in pain is really just you.

the memories return,
and you hear yourself sigh,
a smile creeps back and your tears start to dry
you remember the fun that the two of you had,
and even if he's gone it doesn't hurt quite so bad.

time flies by,
and with it the sad
but you'll never forget the fun times you had.

Света_мой_№1
Apr 15th, 2009, 09:48 PM
third one

I would

I Would For You
If you asked me
To keep a secret
I would
For you
If you asked me
To carry a burden

I would
For you
If you asked me
To make it all better

I would
For you
If you asked me
To make the clouds go away

I would
For you
If you asked me
To always be here no matter what

I would
For you
If you asked me
To make all your dreams come true

I would
For you
If you asked me
To walk to heaven with you

I would
For you.

Света_мой_№1
Apr 15th, 2009, 09:48 PM
and the last one

Music II
Have you ever had that feeling
That without music you would die....
Nothing but a deafening silence
Impossible to enjoy
Imagine a world
Devoid of music
No way to express
Love, friendship, heartbreak
The simple yet important
Things in life we experience
Without this release
It's hard to make sense
Of the emotions
And feelings inside
Nothing there
To fill that void

Now think of how lucky
You and I must be
To be blessed with music
That you can hear and see
Relax
Close your eyes
Breathe in
Visualise
The patterns and melody
As they begin to appear
Teasing and taunting
Pleasuring the ears
Music of the mind
And of the soul
Release a passion
You can't control

Анна
Apr 15th, 2009, 10:25 PM
Thank you, Mel :):kiss:

#2 made me cry :sad:, #3 made me wish for a love like that one day, and #4 is just so true. No wonder the music thread is always busy.

Света_мой_№1
Apr 15th, 2009, 10:50 PM
#2 sorry for that #3think everybody wishes for that at least I do or at least give it someone#4 I agree ofcourse cuz I wrote it myself.

Анна
Apr 16th, 2009, 12:51 AM
Mel, don't feel bad if your words make us cry sometimes. All of us with pets appreciate them so much while they are still here. And crying doesn't always mean feeling bad, if that makes sense. You have a gift of making people feel strongly; never apologize for that :hug: :kiss:

Ziggy Starduck
Apr 16th, 2009, 04:00 AM
Very moving poems Meltjuuuh!

Bероника
Apr 16th, 2009, 02:02 PM
thank you Mel for all 4 poems.I specially like the second.

and I agree with Anne,no need to apologise for making people feel that emotions :kiss:

Света_мой_№1
Apr 16th, 2009, 02:33 PM
ok will never do that anymore

Света_мой_№1
May 6th, 2009, 09:41 PM
I'm a dreamer

I'm a dreamer...
I dream of you, and dream of me,
The sky, the stars and the birds in the trees,
The people here and the people passed
And how time goes by way to fast

But I'm a dreamer, that’s what I love to do
Its sorts my mind and gets me through

About the future and why I'm here
And where I will be this time next year
Who will be with me, will i be alone?
And will I have a house I can call my own?

I'm a crazy dreamer, that’s what I do best
It helps me get things off my chest

The dreams about me aren't always good
I dream that one day I'll be understood
I dream about being a different me
A different person, one that is free

But I'm a dreamer from morning to night
It helps me see a different light
I dream of being in a different place
One where life is not one big race
And most of my dreams, nobody knows
They will stay my dreams, never exposed

I’m a dream and they're not always good
But I wouldn’t change them, even if I could.........................

Bероника
May 6th, 2009, 09:57 PM
that's a beautiful poem,Mel

Ziggy Starduck
May 7th, 2009, 04:12 AM
Me likes this one Mel!

Анна
May 7th, 2009, 04:34 AM
I love this one, Mel :hug:

Света_мой_№1
May 7th, 2009, 08:57 PM
yeah it came out of nothing maybe i should take my poem book with me next time to tennis cuz I had a lot of ideas over there but at home it didnt work

Света_мой_№1
Sep 22nd, 2009, 10:10 PM
ok have been writting again and found a older one.

this is the old one and since a few weeks belongs to my past.

My secret
if only I could tell them
I’m sure they'd understand
but I can’t find the courage
I need a helping hand

I’ve been quiet all my life
when it comes to my fears,
and nothing is going to change
in the next few years

I see her and I smile
but no one knows but me
what I feel down deep inside
if only they could see.

a few I know suspect
but no one knows for real
and this journey through life
is dominated by how I feel.

its not common here
nor will it ever be
and I don’t wanna speak out
so I’m quiet about how I feel

I’ve got that big smile
that people think is genuine
but the happiness that shows,
it isn’t really mine

it belongs to those around me
and I don’t want to let them down
so I smile and I laugh
to cover up the frown

the courage that I have
mediocre as it may be,
it helps me live a lie..
it helps me not be me.

Света_мой_№1
Sep 22nd, 2009, 10:10 PM
this I wrote yesterday

perfect girls aren’t real

I know how it is
and I know how it feels
but real girls aren't perfect
and perfect girls aren't real.

I know what it like
when they point, laugh, and stare
while they beat their long eyelashes
and flip their long hair.

They wear big hoop earrings
they dress in all pink
and when you see them
you believe that you stink.

They say that your ugly
and they say that your fat
but this is reality
and your better than that.

Try to define beauty, sexy, or hot
because if you can't
how do you know that you’re not?

You look in your closet and ask
"How much will it take?"
so I can be perfect
so I can be fake.

You believe that their perfect
but that is untrue
why want to be them
when you were meant to be you?

You don't have to be pretty
to have appeal
because they know that their jealous
because you are for real.

They think that their Barbie
and trust me they’re not
but they think they’re so sexy
and they think they’re so hot

They chose to be ugly on the inside
and pretty on the out
when we have been told
"It's the inside that counts."

But I know how it is
and I know how it feels
but real girls aren't perfect
and perfect girls aren't real

Света_мой_№1
Sep 22nd, 2009, 10:11 PM
not my strongest poem but share it anyway

world

Isn't it confusing?
The way we live.
So spoilt and so convinced.
While thinking of the small problems,
To avoid the big change.
We are acctually tearing down, the world we live in.

Help me, Help you to help us.
Change the world.
For better,
Cuz it can't get worse.
Take a look of what we've done.

A child trying to find a home,
While someone somewhere has more than one.
It's not about sharing,It's all about caring.
How do you feel?
When a mother don't have enough food to feed.
And only the strongest can continue to live.
Cuz there's so many in need.

Help me, Help you to help us.
Change the world.
For better,
Cuz it can't get worse.
Take a look of what we've done.

When did we loose our humanity?
Where did all the smart people go?
Why don't we come together,
And change this world.
Where did our conscience go?
When will we opend up our eyes for the world?
Is it so hard to make a small change?
If everyone does it together.

For better, it can't get worse.
Avoid war, hate and feel our pure love.
Cuz loosing, is all we've done.
And you better turn yourself around.
Help me help you to help us.

Bероника
Sep 22nd, 2009, 11:35 PM
thanks for sharing,Mel,I like all 3 ;)

Света_мой_№1
Oct 23rd, 2009, 04:03 PM
I dont know how I came up to write this one but before I knew it was on paper

butterfly cries

Beautiful butterfly wings of grace
I’m sailing over those unbelievable days
of caves and mermaids
and all I believed true
because out from the deep blue
came you

Bellowing butterfly wings of sight
I’m sweeping along with the waves of that night
to observe the collide
where our spirits entwined
for I had been waiting for you
for sometime

Beat butterfly wings of flair
please persuade me to run round rare
like someone insecure
shy, yet brave
show her it’s safe to sail
with the waves

Blissful butterfly wings of lace
I’m admiring you as we dance and embrace
you encourage my colors
as we collide, caress and roll
full of passion
on sea
and on shore

Bitter butterfly wings of flight
I’m trying to hold the magic tight
but as you dwindle
slowly from a flame
alone I will stand sullen
in the rain

Beloved butterfly wings twinkle bright
I’m crying, reminiscing over that unbelievable night
of sparkling soaring spirits
fleeting sky high
as for even miles
shine smiles

From a mind which is never still
I churn, I yearn
I dream to fulfill
but now I see
why butterfly wings
shared at sea
to tell her to believe
in me

and I cant figure out if full fill is the right english words for this line or should it be for fill

Света_мой_№1
Oct 23rd, 2009, 04:06 PM
and then a poem I wrote for my niece she wants it on paper cuz it made her cry.

My angel, my friend

I never thought that I would find
a friend so great and a friend so kind
I look up to you in every way
'cause I learn something from you every day.

Without you I don't know where I'd be
but you're still here, friends with me
you deserve so much more than I can give
but without you I wouldn't live.

You've given me more than money can buy
and for you I'd give my all and I would die
This feeling I feel gets stronger every day
hoping not to screw it up, I constantly pray.

You're an angel from God up above
and I'm thankful for your understanding love
because when you're around everything seems right
and for you, until the end, I will fight.

It doesn't matter what you do or say
because you'll be my friend anyway
I know the real you that's down deep inside
and in you, I'll always confide.

Thanks for being the friend you are
you're my best friend, an angel by far
everything in you is an inspiration to do great
and you'll be loved by all cause that's your fate!

So never stop being the real and wonderful you
cause all Good shines through in all that you do
and whenever it seems like I'm never there
remember this: I love you and I'll always care!

Анна
Oct 23rd, 2009, 05:13 PM
I dream to full fill

The word is "fulfill" :). And thank you for such beautiful writing.

Света_мой_№1
Oct 24th, 2009, 03:09 PM
thanks for the help glad you liked it.

Света_мой_№1
Jan 3rd, 2011, 05:20 PM
finally got some new poems

The two sides of a Medal.

There is no war without peace
There would be no high without deep.
There would be no day without a night.
There is no darkness without a light.
There would be no love without hate.
There is no doubt without faith.
There would be no braveness without the fear.
There would be no smile without a tear.
There would be no sun without rain.
There would be no joy without pain
There is no looser without a winner
There would be no Saint without a Sinner
There is no enemy without a friend
There would be no beginning without an end
We wouldn’t be able to cherish the blessings we have,
if it weren’t for the bad things that teach us to be thankful for that.
Every Medal has its two sides
so make the best of it and it will be alright.

Света_мой_№1
Jan 3rd, 2011, 05:21 PM
Daddy's Little Girl

a little girl
of all but 3
with the blonde hair
and the little pig tails
side by side
sitting at the end of the bed
not knowing
what is in store for her
she has but one care in the world
that her daddy will
call her his little girl
to praise upon
to shower kisses upon
to hug her
and say it is all right
to make her feel
not so lonely at night
to keep her safe from harm
and to protect her from the dark
one day she will be 23
and she will hold
her daddy's hand so tight
and pray to god
that he still holds
her as his little girl
holds her in his heart
as they both stare in to the night

Света_мой_№1
Jan 3rd, 2011, 05:22 PM
Selfish Humans

For once it would be nice to turn on TV
To watch all our accomplishments, all we have achieved
See humans caring, humans laughing, humans sharing
Opening our eyes, and in what we believe
How did we become so selfish
Not to care about a strangers soul
When did the sun stop rising
Does anyone really care anymore?
The news only shows tears and pain
As priority information, are they insane?
Why re-enforce the behavior, we’re immune
Can’t you see, don’t you know?
How did we become so selfish
Not to care about a strangers soul
When did the sun stop rising
Does anyone really care anymore?
When will we learn it’s not just the words we use
But how we choose to use them and
how we choose to speak them
Makes the difference between being human or being selfish
What’s your choice gonna be?

Света_мой_№1
Mar 18th, 2011, 09:07 PM
its been a while but made a poem!!


On Wings of Whispers
in my hands, i hold a bird
a bird of rustled feathers.
a tiny creature, with a larger fate
and eyes of golden heather.

in this bird, i give all my trust.
as i know it has one goal.
to send a message of my love,
to the other half of my soul.

it will soar through the sky, and over the seas,
til it finds the love of my life..
and until its journey is finally done,
it will continue to fly.

with its destination under its wings,
it will whisper in her ear...
the message i have longed to give,
to my love who is not near.

this tiny bird conceals my heart,
and with one single breath,
it has the potential to change my fate,
for all the moments left.