Our message for Elena's wedding - Page 2 - TennisForum.com
Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools
post #16 of 28 (permalink) Old Jul 19th, 2011, 05:06 AM
Senior Member
 
Join Date: Aug 2010
Posts: 526
                     
Re: Our message for Elena's wedding

Yeah, great editing job, Spring Pools, but now the "the support of a tight-knot fan community that is still going strong" paragraph sounds a bit disjointed, as there is no noun or verb at the beginning of the paragraph Perhaps you should add "You have the support"?
deadparrot is offline  
Sponsored Links
Advertisement
 
post #17 of 28 (permalink) Old Jul 19th, 2011, 05:06 AM
Senior Member
 
Spring Pools's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2010
Posts: 14,058
                     
Re: Our message for Elena's wedding

Quote:
Originally Posted by bruce goose View Post
Yeah,it really is an excellent editing job;the only clear error is in the final paragraph,the 'nearly a year' part,where you crossed out the verb in the sentence and didn't replace it.Otherwise,it's very crisp and sounds sincere and heartfelt
That was supposed to be left the WTA tour. Whoops.

Zarina
"I'm really her idol" - Jelena Jankovic
Spring Pools is offline  
post #18 of 28 (permalink) Old Jul 19th, 2011, 11:43 AM
Senior Member
 
Pilongo's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Barcelona
Posts: 946
                     
Re: Our message for Elena's wedding

Totally perfect message IMO

Entertainments Manager of the renovated SS Dementieva

"How's uncommonly that I have all of you: my fans - my friends! I couldn't leave without saying you THANK YOU VERY MUCH for the support, devotion and love!
I feel it not only here in Moscow, when I'm on top and win.
It helps me go-ahead and hang tough. Thank you for warmth of your wishes. I LOVE YOU. MY VICTORIES ARE FOR YOU!"

Elena Dementieva, October 2006
Pilongo is offline  
post #19 of 28 (permalink) Old Jul 19th, 2011, 01:35 PM Thread Starter
Senior Member
 
Alenyaa's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: SS Dementieva courts
Posts: 6,728
                     
Re: Our message for Elena's wedding

Yeah, if only it hadn't been for the fact I sent qwertyed the message before you guys came in with your suggestions. I reworked the message following Bruce's first post, but I sent it before Iva and the rest of you posted your remarks, so unfortunately I haven't been able to rework our message accordingly. Whoops...

Thank you, Elena

Jelena Dokic, Tsvetana Pironkova, Caroline Wozniacki
Daniela Hantuchova, Gisela Dulko, Julia Görges

Former Training Accommodation Manager aboard the SS Dementieva
Now discovering New Horizons...
Alenyaa is offline  
post #20 of 28 (permalink) Old Jul 19th, 2011, 02:57 PM
Senior Member
 
Pilongo's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Barcelona
Posts: 946
                     
Re: Our message for Elena's wedding

Well there was no rush for sending it so fast I think , as Lena will probably be unavailable for a couple of weeks or so, and she won't read the message until all things will get back on their normal track.
I hope you can still send an update message to quertyd before that anyways.
If not, well that's still a letter written with all the heart, all our hearts...

Entertainments Manager of the renovated SS Dementieva

"How's uncommonly that I have all of you: my fans - my friends! I couldn't leave without saying you THANK YOU VERY MUCH for the support, devotion and love!
I feel it not only here in Moscow, when I'm on top and win.
It helps me go-ahead and hang tough. Thank you for warmth of your wishes. I LOVE YOU. MY VICTORIES ARE FOR YOU!"

Elena Dementieva, October 2006
Pilongo is offline  
post #21 of 28 (permalink) Old Jul 19th, 2011, 03:04 PM
Senior Member
 
Join Date: Aug 2010
Posts: 526
                     
Re: Our message for Elena's wedding

Quote:
Originally Posted by Pilongo View Post
Well there was no rush for sending it so fast I think , as Lena will probably be unavailable for a couple of weeks or so, and she won't read the message until all things will get back on their normal track.
I hope you can still send an update message to quertyd before that anyways.
If not, well that's still a letter written with all the heart, all our hearts...
According to Kudryavtseva, Maxim's sister Katia is getting married next week, so either Elena and Maxim went on a short honeymoon immediately after the wedding or they're still in Moscow preparing for the next wedding
deadparrot is offline  
post #22 of 28 (permalink) Old Jul 19th, 2011, 03:07 PM
Senior Member
 
Join Date: Jun 2007
Posts: 13,877
                     
Re: Our message for Elena's wedding

Quote:
Originally Posted by Pilongo View Post
Well there was no rush for sending it so fast I think , as Lena will probably be unavailable for a couple of weeks or so, and she won't read the message until all things will get back on their normal track.
I hope you can still send an update message to quertyd before that anyways.
If not, well that's still a letter written with all the heart, all our hearts...
Yeah,Elena will read our INTENT much more than she'll notice our grammar

WTA suffering from Dementieva withdrawal, a lack of true queens

Congrats on Number Three, Kim! We need more of you in this world

Monica Puig, Guapa Teniista Numero Uno de las chicas latinas
bruce goose is offline  
post #23 of 28 (permalink) Old Jul 19th, 2011, 03:09 PM
Senior Member
 
Join Date: Aug 2010
Posts: 526
                     
Re: Our message for Elena's wedding

Quote:
Originally Posted by bruce goose View Post
Yeah,Elena will read our INTENT much more than she'll notice our grammar
deadparrot is offline  
post #24 of 28 (permalink) Old Jul 15th, 2012, 07:12 PM
Junior Member
 
Demented's Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2010
Posts: 28
                     
Re: Our message for Elena's wedding

Can we please have a reality check here people, I am JEALOUS, and Maxim is NOT WORTHY of her !!!
Demented is offline  
post #25 of 28 (permalink) Old Jul 15th, 2012, 07:35 PM
Senior Member
 
Maca.Lofish's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: On SS Dementieva
Posts: 1,880
                     
Re: Our message for Elena's wedding

tomorrow is their first wedding anniversary... most people don't like Maxim but Elena is happy and that's all it matters

Maca Lofish
Official Doctor of the SS Dementieva
Mommy Lena Dementieva
Veronika Afinogenova
Sergei Afinogenov

Maca.Lofish is offline  
post #26 of 28 (permalink) Old Jul 15th, 2012, 08:05 PM
Worshipping the bangs
 
miffedmax's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Larsson's Player Forum
Posts: 55,767
                     
Re: Our message for Elena's wedding

Happy Anniversary to Lena and Max

Max
Pass the duct tape and super glue. Lena's done broke my heart one last time.
Onward my LOB! Lena (ret.) Vika Vee TOB Caro Alexa Sabs Wicky Lesia Vania BMS Ekat Andi H. Jo-La Lena V KP2 Lil Bit Kiki Mini Mak Baby Veronika
V Squad, The LOB Elite: Vika, Venus and the Mad Viking of Norrland
Jo-La Duchess of Norrland and Bastad
Elena Viatcheslavovna Dementieva--Eternal Goddess of the Divine Bangs
miffedmax is offline  
post #27 of 28 (permalink) Old Jul 15th, 2012, 09:08 PM Thread Starter
Senior Member
 
Alenyaa's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: SS Dementieva courts
Posts: 6,728
                     
Re: Our message for Elena's wedding

Has it already been a year??

Thank you, Elena

Jelena Dokic, Tsvetana Pironkova, Caroline Wozniacki
Daniela Hantuchova, Gisela Dulko, Julia Görges

Former Training Accommodation Manager aboard the SS Dementieva
Now discovering New Horizons...
Alenyaa is offline  
post #28 of 28 (permalink) Old Jul 16th, 2012, 10:25 PM
Senior Member
 
Maca.Lofish's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: On SS Dementieva
Posts: 1,880
                     
Re: Our message for Elena's wedding

yeap today

Maca Lofish
Official Doctor of the SS Dementieva
Mommy Lena Dementieva
Veronika Afinogenova
Sergei Afinogenov

Maca.Lofish is offline  
Reply

Quick Reply
Message:
Options

Register Now



In order to be able to post messages on the TennisForum.com forums, you must first register.
Please enter your desired user name, your email address and other required details in the form below.

User Name:
Password
Please enter a password for your user account. Note that passwords are case-sensitive.

Password:


Confirm Password:
Email Address
Please enter a valid email address for yourself.

Email Address:
OR

Log-in









Human Verification

In order to verify that you are a human and not a spam bot, please enter the answer into the following box below based on the instructions contained in the graphic.



Thread Tools
Show Printable Version Show Printable Version
Email this Page Email this Page



Posting Rules  
You may not post new threads
You may post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On

 
For the best viewing experience please update your browser to Google Chrome