Re: The Singing Thread [comments appreciated]
Originally Posted by Imperfect Angel
sounds like a mess but then it's actually a pretty good mess!
and the British accent.
Well I am a Madonna fan after all
Originally Posted by Shuji Shuriken
Thanks for the critique guys
. I was VERY nasally on that indeed. Cringe-worthy at points
. But yeah...I have improved a bit since then. And yeah...the Brandy influence is hard to miss. I worship that bitch
It actually reminded me more of 'Talking in His Sleep' by Toni Braxton, especially those opening chords. Also, I like the melody of the first few words you sing ("really thought you cared for me, but then you'd just up and leave
")and I felt like it could have been utilised a lot more. I don't know a damn thing about vocals so I won't comment on that aspect
but they sounded good to me
Perseverance not prescription.
Last edited by Patoranking; Feb 19th, 2013 at 07:30 AM.