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Hi

I had to write this 8p paper for my german class and was wondering if anyone was willing to have a look at it and take out any grammatical errors (which i'm sure will be plenty). Also, it's a linguistic analysis so any input from a native speaker is probably highly welcome.

Anyone want to help this poor student? (as quickly as possible cause it's due tomorrow )

thanks so much
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Men när natten är ljus - I ditt sjuttiotalshus
Och du är ånga, spår av ett moln
I en dröm om att fly till någonting nytt

Och du håller så hårt och när längtan blir svår
Så är jag din, din, din att ta med
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I have corrected it including point 3.1
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thank you

someone want to have a look at the rest?

Men när natten är ljus - I ditt sjuttiotalshus
Och du är ånga, spår av ett moln
I en dröm om att fly till någonting nytt

Och du håller så hårt och när längtan blir svår
Så är jag din, din, din att ta med
Att ta ut, att ta in i någonting nytt
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